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With new art direction, I like them a lot.The 3rd ad is good, but the line could be reworked, me thinks.Nice work.
I think they're sweet. If I remember correctly Brady was well on his way to being a Superbeast after his first semester at Brainco. Nice lines too.I don't think the art direction is bad either, I just think it needs to be different. What about having the map rest on turf, ball field sand, and on home plate? Just an idea.
I do like them but agree w/ Falch that the art direction could be reworked. Maybe putting the maps directly on the background w/ a bleed so their not floating. Then the bottom elements, or logo at least, could have that tattered edge look they currently have, over the rest of the background. Go superbeast!
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