tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6288641531795519232.post3529114304280261652..comments2023-10-07T04:04:35.304-07:00Comments on Portfolio Party: Baseball Hall of Fameamericanmidwestsamuraihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05868702591135701767noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6288641531795519232.post-22344320289323791282007-09-21T10:02:00.000-07:002007-09-21T10:02:00.000-07:00I do like them but agree w/ Falch that the art dir...I do like them but agree w/ Falch that the art direction could be reworked. Maybe putting the maps directly on the background w/ a bleed so their not floating. Then the bottom elements, or logo at least, could have that tattered edge look they currently have, over the rest of the background. Go superbeast!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6288641531795519232.post-46679548061415690442007-09-20T08:20:00.000-07:002007-09-20T08:20:00.000-07:00I think they're sweet. If I remember correctly Bra...I think they're sweet. If I remember correctly Brady was well on his way to being a Superbeast after his first semester at Brainco. Nice lines too.<BR/><BR/>I don't think the art direction is bad either, I just think it needs to be different. What about having the map rest on turf, ball field sand, and on home plate? Just an idea.Casey Brewerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14355016142906764377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6288641531795519232.post-64156380375014664862007-09-20T06:22:00.000-07:002007-09-20T06:22:00.000-07:00With new art direction, I like them a lot.The 3rd ...With new art direction, I like them a lot.<BR/><BR/>The 3rd ad is good, but the line could be reworked, me thinks.<BR/><BR/>Nice work.R. Falchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03300194805377492119noreply@blogger.com