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Wednesday, April 4, 2007

Critique Week: Bonfire Gloves

At Brainco, we've just finished up critique for the trimester. Some fellow classmates agreed to showing some from a campaign they worked on for Bonfire Snowboarding Gloves. I'm sure they would appreciate any feedback their fellow peers across the country could give them.

On a larger note, I would personally like to encourage anyone and everyone to feel free to post their work on Portfolio Party--whether its marker comps, headlines, or full-blown computer stuff. If you're interested in becoming an author to the site--please let me know and I can send you an invite. It can be as confidential as you would like it to be. Thanks.


Brock Johnson said...

These are nice. I really like the layout. My favorite headline is "Jack Frost Just Pissed Himself." The other two are good as well, but that one stands out to me. There are some cool ideas in the body copy too, particularly the idea of the snowball melting.

Anonymous said...

Hey guys, interesting work. The hierarchy is a little skewed, and the body copy sits pretty flat and runs close to other elements.

That being said, I like the idea and the look. It might just need to be more organized.